To complete this assignment, read the initial draft provided and then write an initial paragraph in which you discuss the problems that you see in the current draft. Next, read the revised draft and write another paragraph in which you discuss 1) whether the problems that you saw in the first draft were addressed, 2) whether the revisions fixed other issues that you hadn’t noticed in the draft, and 3) why the revisions are or are not an improvement over the first draft. If you believe other revisions should be made to the draft, conclude your assignment with an explanation of what those are and how the revisions should be made.Your discussion should be 500 – 650 words in length.
The drafts are available here: https://raiderwriter.engl.ttu.edu/files/InitialDraftforBA6FA14.pdf and https://raiderwriter.engl.ttu.edu/files/LaterDraftforBA6FA14.pdf

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To complete this assignment, read the initial draft provided on Raider Writer under BA 6 (pdf files) and then write an initial paragraph in which you discuss the problems that you see in the first draft. Next, read the second revised draft (2nd pdf file) and write another paragraph in which you discuss:
Whether the problems that you saw in the first draft were addressed,
Whether the revisions fixed other issues that you hadn’t noticed in the draft
Why the revisions are or are not an improvement over the first draft. If you believe other revisions should be made to the draft, conclude your assignment with an explanation of what those are and how the revisions should be made.
Your discussion should be 500 – 650 words in length.
IMPORTANT: Focus on the larger issues such as content, structure, and adherence to the assignment. Focus less on grammar, punctuation, and/or citation.

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