My Trip to Indonesia “The Essay Title”
the essay should have :
1) Introduction: the introduction should have a hook, Background and thesis statement.
I’ve already wrote the Introduction and it is about you to change in it or keep it “Have you ever visit Indonesia ? if not then pack your bags and be ready to go to Indonesia.
That’s when my husband told me he has planned a visit to Indonesia, which is the largest archipelago in the world, consists of 17,000 islands. The capital city of Indonesia is Jakarta. Islam is the dominant religion in the country. Indonesia also has a larger Muslim population than any other country in the world, with approximately 202.9 million identifying themselves as Muslim (87.2% of Indonesia’s total population in 2011).Since Indonesia is located across the equator, the country has a tropical climate throughout the year. It consists of 6 months of dry season, and 6 months of raining season. I was very happy and excited to visit a new place so far away. Indonesia is a country with a mix of interesting cultures, exotic foods, and beautiful places. Tourists from all over the world come to see the sights and experience a culture like never before.everyone should go to Indonesia as change despite the amazing places, beautiful gardens and experience a new culture, it’s also a cheap country and its people are polies and educated”
2) At least two body paragraphs : first paragraph talk about Jakarta the capital city of Indonesia and I stay there 3 days and write about the places I visite like Taman Mini and Jaya Ancol and Dunia Fantasi and SeaWorld and Monas and more and how much I enjoy in it and shold end with a hook and so.
The second paragraph should talk about Puncak “the green Montain” we stay there for one week .you should write about the places I visited there like Safari and the gardens of flowers and roses there and went for rowing boat in some rivers and visited bigest lake there which is Lido Lakes and we had our launch there in some floating resturant there, and how much we enjoy there shold end with a hook.
3) a conclusion